Chocolate is delicious,
One of many foods.
I always eat some chocolate,
When im in a bad mood.
It comes in different flavours,
Caramel, Double, Fudge.
Everyone has a favourite,
Which would you prefer?
Chocolate is delicious,
It has always been the best.
Ice-Cream, Lollies, Popcorn,
It's better than the rest.
Tim L
Well I was eating chocolate just before I wrote this poem. Thinking of what to write about. And I wonder how this came into my mind =]
What I'm saying is that chocolate really is what everyone says it is.
Lucious, delicable, creamy and "better than the rest."
There is use of rhyme in the 1st and 3rd stanzas.
ChocolateFTW
1 comment:
Hey Tim,
I just read your poem and I really enjoyed it. How you used such a simple topic like chocolate and created a poem out of it. I also loved the way you compared it with other things and how it all fitted together in the end. It was great that not all of the stanzas rhymed, just a couple of them. I had fun reading it.
Carolyn.
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